Checkmate

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I remember the time my father taught me chess. On a Sunday afternoon, I sat cross legged at the center table in the drawing room, silently watching him put the pieces in place. β€œThis is the queen, and this is the king”, he said, holding up the pieces. My eyes widened. I reached for them, running my fingers gently along the piece, examining it closely as he set up the board.

He went on to explain the rules to me. β€œThe aim is to protect the king at all costs” he said, showing me how the different pieces moved across the chessboard. It was the most beautiful game I’d seen. I stopped listening. All I saw was a story. A story of two kingdoms, equal in strength, competing for supremacy.

I saw a battle begin before my eyes. The pieces charged towards each other, falling by the dozen as the game unfolded before me. Pawns were mercilessly sacrificed to save the knights and knights grabbed the opportunity to face certain death for their king. The king stayed quiet, almost complacent, surrounded securely by his fortress of devoted subjects while those on the battlefield continued to fall.

Their bodies lay scattered across the table. The fallen whites and blacks tossed carelessly aside as the war waged on. I looked sympathetically at the black Rook, as he lay still on the corner of the table. Overthrown by a mere pawn, he thought, for shame. He hoped his partner would avenge the insult. He lay still, struggling to stay awake, his eyes glued to the battle until the other Rook, with one swift move brought the white Pawn down. The Pawn fell slowly, hitting the ground as the blacks broke into a roaring applause that resounded through the battlefield. The Rook looked at him as he twitched in pain, the piercing wounds in his own body disappearing, if only for a minute. He breathed deep and finally closed his eyes.

Back in the fortress, I saw a woman married to a man who didn’t deserve her. A smart, able, powerful woman who had sworn to protect her husband. A husband who was lazy, unskilled and unfit to be a warrior. He stayed in the fortress, anxiously watching the battle, as pieces fought and fell. He shifted nervously, taking a step any direction he pleased as the enemy got closer. The Queen stood by his side, getting ready for battle, as the fortress shrunk with every minute. She wondered how different it would’ve been if she was the ruler. A trained warrior, she had mastered every move in the book. She could move in any direction, for any length with unmatched skill. Her heart breaking as she watched her soldiers die. She ached to step onto the battlefield, wondering how many lives she could have saved if she wasn’t sworn to the king. Yet, like any gracious woman, she knew her place. She would stand beside her husband until it was time to sacrifice herself for him.

There were few pieces left on the battlefield. The queen bravely took her place in front of her shivering husband. He stood still behind her, as the enemy got closer. The queen lunged forward, striking the white bishop that seemed to be getting too close. The King heaved a sigh of relief. Until, β€œCheckmate” the voice echoing through the battle field. The Queen turned around in horror as the white Rook and knight laughed menacingly through their yellowing teeth. The king looked at her helplessly as the rook toppled him over, letting him fall off the board and onto the table.

The white King seemed pleased. Looking around at the lands he had conquered. He looked dully at the bodies that lay at his feet. Knights, Pawns, his Queen. He scanned the barren chessboard, his eyes travelling to the fallen king. It seemed like he was lost in deep, peaceful sleep. A pang of jealousy stung him as he stood alone on the cold, lonely battlefield, suddenly craving the luxury of everlasting sleep. Β He looked around silently, unsure who had really won the war.

β€œTutu, do you understand?” my father asked me. I broke out of my trance and blinked softly. β€œYes”.
β€œGood. Enough for today.” He said, picking up the pieces. I helped him, picking up the fallen pawns, knights and kings to drop them into the box. I marveled at how they looked so peaceful. The different pieces, tangled up in each other, oblivious to the war, the bloodshed, the loss.
Until the same time, next Sunday.

264 responses to “Checkmate”

  1. Oh so beautiful. I love how you portray the heartbreak and despair that comes from war, through a flame of chess. It makes me want to learn how to play now!

  2. I could picture the whole story play out as I read this πŸ™‚

  3. Such evocative writing. Brava!

    1. Thank you, Maithri πŸ™‚

  4. Loved this one. ….you brought a game to life!

  5. P Senthil Kumar Avatar
    P Senthil Kumar

    There cannot be a more beautiful and absorbing way of describing the game of chess!Exquisite imagination!

    Warm regards…..Senthil

    Light the candle…..

    Sent from my iPad

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    1. Thank you so much, uncle πŸ™‚

  6. Jan De La Force Avatar
    Jan De La Force

    Enjoyed this! πŸ™‚

  7. Hemant Sharma Avatar

    nice

  8. wow….and they say chess is a game of mind. loved the beautiful way you played it…..the emotions.the rise,the fall,the grace….superb

  9. This one is alike the post on Indian elections where you create a picture that seems like a marvelous invention. That’s the beauty of your creativity πŸ™‚

  10. I never looked at chess from this perspective. Brilliant.

  11. This was such a wonderful read ! Reminded me of the time my own father taught me this game πŸ™‚ I have always thought the Queen is powerful and her husband quite useless and I’m glad someone else thinks so too πŸ˜›

  12. Man! I wish I could write like you.

  13. Beautifully written. Loved it!

  14. Superbly described. You have a beautiful talent and imagination.

  15. Interesting, and I must say exciting. I can only imagine how self-important/ignorant/oblivious the inventors of chess may have been while crafting this beautiful game. A blog in 2014 finally adds a refreshing perspective to a game that is probably two millennia old!

  16. Sushruti Tripathi Avatar
    Sushruti Tripathi

    I looked for your email id but couldn’t find it. Leaving a comment here is my last resort. Somehow, it did not feel right to make public my appreciation for your words. It was as if the sanctity of it all, or rather the sincerity, would somehow be reduced.
    I stumbled upon your blog only recently. And I read every single post that very day, on a borrowed internet connection because I was in a new city. There is a very different and touching way in which you weave your tales. It’s spell binding. I doubt I could leave any of them mid-way. And the last lines often find resonance with something deep within my heart. Especially posts that I can relate to as a woman, and am sure many others do too.That what you create here is beautiful, is an understatement.
    We seem to be people with similar interests. I love words too. Though I haven’t yet gotten to a point where I can have a consistent blog to be proud of. I also happen to love dancing and debating! And getting to know people. It is sad that we miss out on getting to know brilliant people simply because we never reach out. Or mostly because it just sounds kind of creepy. πŸ˜›
    But hey, pen pals aren’t that outdated, are they? Or maybe I’m just ancient in my outlook sometimes. Would be nice to get to know you!
    Keep spinning these gems. I resort to them often in times of college induced despair and a craving for words that speak.
    And for that, I must thank you.
    πŸ™‚

    1. Wow Sushruti thanks a tonne! Really means a lot! Please keep coming back for more πŸ™‚ Hope the pieces to come match your expectations!

  17. Congrats on being Freshly Pressed! You truly deserve it. Ecery story I read touches my soul!

  18. Wow! Wow!! Wow!!! Beautiful artistry! You are blessed beyond words! Beautiful!πŸ™

  19. An ageless story, skillfully manipulated. Beautiful!

  20. This is a really exciting and descriptive way of describing a game! I wish you could do another game!

  21. Excellent post. Congrats on Freshly Pressed!

  22. Reblogged this on jonjominns's Blog and commented:
    Thank you for posting – excellent piece.

  23. Thoughts of chess, the need to play it, the reassuring feeling of satisfaction. MR DOJO

  24. Reblogged this on dojolivin and commented:
    Satisfactions…. #retrrocreatives

  25. Reblogged this on dojolivin and commented:
    Satisfactions…. #retrrocreatives

  26. Congrats on being Freshly Check Mated!

  27. I loved the way you wrote this. Beautiful view point.

  28. This was good…thanks…just started a game with a friend today…

  29. Your words are incredible! Everyone keeps saying beautiful over and over again in the comments and there is a massive reason for that! This is the first post of yours i have ever read and it was a breathtaking story, thankyou so much for writing it down for us all to read and i cant help but say it again, it was beautiful! πŸ’œ

  30. Haven’t read a beautiful piece like this for some time. It was treat to my eyes. Welcome you to blog at thewoomag.com and share some insights with other women.

    1. Read twice, loved it both times!

  31. Beautiful voice & well done metaphor. Thank you.

  32. this was so beautiful πŸ™‚ you potrayed it all so beautifully πŸ™‚

  33. This makes me want to learn chess! Makes chess sound very interesting, there is more to it when what meets the eyes!

  34. Reblogged this on Daily Reads By Kiarra.

  35. Wonderful!!!

  36. Wow! You hook my imagination while reading this story of game board ..Great story.

  37. You brought the game alive !! Loved it.

  38. After reading this I will play chess differently next time πŸ™‚

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